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On raging winds the red clouds form. . .
Prepared now for a Demon storm. . .
The time has come for them to feed. . .
To rape the world and spread their seed. . .

Lightning streaks are tearing down. . .
They hit the earth to scortch the ground. . .
They rip the land on which we walk. . .
Creating pits where demons stalk. . .

Once in every 1,000 years. . .
They come to revel in your fears. . .
They walk upon the lands of men. . .
The earth is but a feasting den. . .

They torture first, then eat the dead. . .
They live for pain and thrive on dread. . .
They kill the good, recruit the bad. . .
From biggest man, to smallest lad. . .

They care not what is in your heart. . .
They thirst for tearing souls apart. . .
They bathe in pools of flowing blood. . .
As dark as pitch and thick as mud. . .

The clouds begin to slowly break. . .
The sun shines through in tiny wakes. . .
They crawl back to the pits that formed. . .
Thus ends another demon storm. . .
©2001-2009 ~jokerman
:iconjokerman:

Author's Comments

I'm a big fan of fantasy and often write it. There isn't a specific place for fantasy so I figured it would be best suited going here. I hope you like it. . . Let me know what you think. . . Thanx

Daily Deviation

Given 2001-04-20

Demon Storm by jokerman Frightening visions of fantasy, lightning streaks, "they thirst for tearing souls apart..." Yikes. Shiver. Turn all the lights in the house on before you read this, unless you just love to be scared out of your wits...muahahaa. (Featured by ^devart)

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:iconcooper:
The light builds a protective dome,
For you to share a daily poem.

This will be added to my devpack; it is simply amazing and I think it should get a daily poem sometime... excellent work.

dEaTh SmIlEs At Us AlL...
AlL i CaN dO iS sMiLe BaCk...

@coop@
:iconvm:
Wow, brilliant poem.
Very good description of this "demon storm".. and quite deserving of the award :D (Big Grin)

congrats

virtual mirage
http://www.vmirage.net
:iconcooper:
I TOLD U SO!!!!! daily poem; I can sense these things.... I am gifted and yet I bow to thee...... so i must be..... young and free..... take care my friend.. and stay forever amazing.

dEaTh SmIlEs At Us AlL...
AlL i CaN dO iS sMiLe BaCk...

@coop@
:iconjokerman:
Thank you all and especially you coop. . . :) (Smile)

Jokerman
I AM SOFA KING WE TALL DID !!!
:iconjsenn:
This poem was so much scary fun to read. The very first line, the "raging winds" captured me, carried me through to the end. Then I read it again.

The title is perfect. One cannot skip reading a poem with a title like that. Yikes. If this were a movie I would not go see it, lol. And I sure did turn the lights on in the house before I read it the second time.

It is a wonderful poem Jokerman. It is an excellent poem to sort of carry the reader away from the cares of the week on a Friday night.

Presented to a fantastic poet, the Daily Poem. Congratulations!
:icondarkphoenix:
Yeah, we had a storm like that just a couple of weeks back! :-) (Smile) Nicely written. I like it!

:icon-fiction:

sweet
i like its rhythm
...
[fiction] http://sectae.ellicit.org
:iconkeen:
ha!

i just love fantasy... just finished baldur's gate ii.

this was a fun piece to read, and i can tell you had fun writing it (which is, of course, the most important part!).

ciao man and keep writin'!
keen

:iconodium:
I LOVE IT im into all that scary stuff and wild and this i swear is the best pome ive read like that i mean it deffinitly deserved that dp maybe one of mine will get one some day i hope so god job keep up the good wrk


Odium
Evil Is Chaos
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